Mickey Mouse
has yellow shoes
and red pants.
and red pants.
By Kieran
Tuesday, August 20, 2019
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Kia Ora Kieran, it's Ruaumoko year 4/5 class here. We really enjoyed your description of Mickey Mouse! You have described what Mickey wears really well.... When we read your post I learnt that Mickey has yellow shoes. Next time, you could write more about Mickey's personality.
ReplyDeleteki Ora Kieran I love how you put what kind of stuff he has but maybe you can work on putting more writing in you sentence.😊
ReplyDeleteHi Kieran i love your writing i never knew he wore red pants and yellow shoes i thought it was the other way around.
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